Department of English

Faculty of Arts, Chulalongkorn University



2202235  Reading and Analysis for the Study of English Literature

 

Practice Test Discussion


 

General Comments:

  • Follow instructions. If the test paper asks you to discuss at least two works, don't discuss only one. If the instructions say choose one set of quotes, don't respond to quotes in other sets.
  • Have a clear point to make in each of your paragraphs, and in the essay as a whole.
  • Support your ideas with textual evidence.
  • Avoid plot summary. Order your discussion around the point you are making, not according to the the order of the work or plot of the story. Mention only plot points that are necessary to your analysis.
  • Proofread. The mistaken title "Road Taken" may lead to an inaccurate reading of "The Road Not Taken." "Don't Go Gentle into That Good Night" is less emphatic and formal than the correct "Do Not Go Gentle into That Good Night." Beeber and Caroll are also incorrect authors' names.
  • Follow academic conventions in writing about literature such as using the literary present tense and referring to authors by their last names. Avoid non-close reading tendencies in your discussion.

           

 

Prompt: (25 points)  Choose one set of quotes from the two given below, and focus on at least two works identifiable from the quotes in response to the following prompt. Literature is said to open up imagination. Show how each of your chosen works makes use of its limitations to create possibilities for challenging the human mind.

 

Comments:

  • The prompt asks you to show how writers use limitations to create possibilities. At least two works need to be discussed.
  • Good responses answer this prompt right away and demonstrate understanding of the works and critical and analytical thinking as well as effective writing. An essay with high marks
    • Within the first three sentences,
      • clearly identifies at least two works, each with limitations
      • clearly and accurately indicates the work titles and authors being discussed
      • clearly identifies the possibilities created with limited resources
    • Explains what about the human mind is challenged and how
    • Demonstrates how overcoming the limitation(s) challenges thinking habits, fully and logically elaborating on and illustrating the connection between breaking the limitation and challenging human thought
    • Is not wordy or rambling, but stays focused on illustrating the creativity that emerges as a result of limitations in the works
    • Shows sensitivity to the works' diction, argument, logic flow, sentence/line structure, imagery, form, patterns, incongruities, and their limiting or freeing effects
    • Shows ability to synthesize learning from many sessions, sources, and disciplines, and willingness to extend class discussion
    • Gives relevant and compelling evidence from the text of the works to illustrate and support its discussion and incorporates it smoothly into the prose of the essay.
    • Does not lapse into retelling the story, describing the poem, giving a plot summary, or paraphrase.
    • Follows academic conventions in writing and citation.
    • Has very few or no grammatical mistakes.



Good Responses

Notice how good responses answer the prompt right away, identify the works involved, and establish the focus and direction of the discussion that will follow that takes into consideration the chosen works together meaningfully rather than separately.


Student T:

 

(25 points)  Literature is said to open up imagination. Show how each of your chosen works makes use of its limitations to create possibilities for challenging the human mind. 
 

Both Dylan Thomas' "Do Not Go Gentle into That Good Night" and Gwendolyn Brooks' "We Real Cool" make use of their limitations to achieve creative effects and create new possibilities: the former by utilizing the limited rhyme scheme of a villanelle and the latter by utilizing the rhythm of jazz music. To begin with, in "Do Not Go Gentle," Thomas chooses two extremely powerful lines (the first two) to be repeated throughout the poem. By doing this, he cleverly utilizes a rhyme scheme which seems very limiting, achieving a very empowering effect and thus creating a memorable anthem. Also, by overcoming this limitation, he is urging us (his father in his case) to defy the limitation of death itself: the repeated alternation between the lines "Do not go gentle into that good night" and "Rage, rage against the dying of the light" does not sound tedious and boring at all--as a repeated chant should—but instead very reassuring and inspiring. In "We Real Cool," Brooks utilizes a rhythm of a different art form to make the poem sound fresh and to portray a very clear image and story: jazz rhythm. By opting to have the rhyming syllables in the middle of each line (cool-school, late-straight, sin-gin, June-soon) and placing the enjambment of "we" at the end, she succeeds in creating a swing rhythm of a jazz tune with the format of a different art form, that is, a poem, and transcending the limitation of its rhyme scheme. This "tune" emphasizes the themes and setting of the poem effectively: hearing the poem, we picture a pool hall where this group of seven teenagers are hanging out, acting all "cool," drinking thinned gin and skipping school--all of this accompanied by jazz music from the juke box. In conclusion, looking at these two poems, we can see how the limitations of the poem structure themselves could be utilized to achieve creative possibilities.


- Good: immediately identifies the two chosen works and answers what their limitations are and how they are used to create possibilities
- Good: links the two works together by contrasting their different uses of limitations while setting up for possibilities discussion

- Good: illustrates and supports arguments with specific examples from the poems

- Needs improvement: smoother and more informative transition from Thomas' poem into Brooks'

- Good: combination mid-line rhyme and auto end rhyme transcends rhyme scheme limitation is a good argument

- Repetitive: "utilized" somewhat overused; fix: vary the term with synonyms or vary sentence structures

           


Common Problems

Does Not Answer the Test Question, Rewrites the Test Question

Retells the Story or Describes the Work Rather Than Analyzes the Work

Vague
Student P:

 

(25 points)  Literature is said to open up imagination. Show how each of your chosen works makes use of its limitations to create possibilities for challenging the human mind. 
 

With limitations embedded in literature, possibilities can be made when contemplating the text, opening imagination conceived by humans. For example, a part of Jabberwocky written by Lewis Caroll shows the readers the limitation which revolves around diction. Unbeknownst to the readers, such words as "Twas," "brillig, "borogoves" and "raths" make the readers feel very limited as they cannot think of an accurate definition of each unfamiliar word, resulting in the readers' feeling that the poem itself is restricted with strange vocabulary. Thus, the readers are stuck with it with no hope of arriving at the conclusion as to what the author of the poem is trying to illustrate. However, as the readers reread this stanza again and again, it seems that they are encouraged to create their meanings without having to rely on how each word is translated; it is the effect of possibilities that broaden the readers' horizon, which is an imagination. Some may take it as a nonsense poem as it randomly says this and that. Some may consider it to be fantasy. Some may think this is a horror. As imagination is prompted due to the fact that the author makes use of atypical words to suggest limitations, this can be considered a challenge of the human mind as they finally break through obstacles to come up with their own definitions. The next example showing limitations which in turn will produce possibilities is the excerpt from Defender of the Faith as follows: "I've got relatives in St. Louis...God, Sergeant, that'd mean an awful lot to me." Stated by Grossbart, this statement implicitly illustrates the limitation where Nathan Marx is forced to sympathize with Grossbart's request; it is such a closeness to the readers and also to Marx because we are restricted to such a claim and a request with no other meanings in this statement on the first hand. Moreover, we believe that closed response—we first think Grossbart will do what he has requested right away if he is permitted to go outside of the camp. However, with such limitations, the readers may feel vague and unclear whether Grossbart's word is truth or not. As this finally dawns on the readers, they are open to predicting the future after Marx allows Grossbart along with his friends to leave camp; possibilities occur. And this leads to various interpretations as to how the story will turn out, depending on how the readers predict the possibilities that can happen in just only one statement. In conclusion, although limitations may hinder the readers from arriving at the conclusion and imagining what will happen next, limitations can subtly challenge readers to consider possibilities embedded in them, opening the readers to create a world of their own.


- Needs improvement: vague and general opening thesis statement
- Needs proofreading: poem and short story titles should be in quotation marks and Carroll is mispelled

- Debatable point: readers are not aware that unfamiliar words make them feel restricted

- Slightly off-topic: readers feeling limited ≠ the poems limitations and how it is using them for creative possibilities

- Needs improvement: cumbersome and wordy phrasings; fix: pare down to clarify

- Needs improvement: too little substantiation of your claims and ideas; fix: support your points with specific evidence from the text

- Good: Grossbart's lie limiting moral response is a good argument

- Avoid speculation: because speculating on what the work does not do takes the focus away from what the work is and does do, speculation is not good analysis of the text
 
- Essay structure: there are no paragraph breaks to divide the writing into a logical series of ideas

        


Broad, General

Inadequate or No Substantiation
Student S:

 

(25 points)  Literature is said to open up imagination. Show how each of your chosen works makes use of its limitations to create possibilities for challenging the human mind. 
 

Undoubtedly, it can be argued that there is an array of limitations binding literature from absolute freedom of lexical navigation, however, the play "Misreadings" and the astonishingly short and concise poem "We Real Cool" serve as remarkable examples of how literature makes use of its limitations and give birth to possibilities. These two works, in particular, masterfully free themselves from the shackle of words—particle of thoughts with imposing preconceptions and attached meaning—and challenge our minds.

As a written work, "Misreadings" consists of meticulously chosen words, these words, though crafted carefully with the intent to provoke thoughts, are restricting in and of themselves. "I live in worlds made by words" claims Dr Ruth; with this one sentence of seven words alone, the playwright is able to characterise Dr Ruth, who, as a result, becomes a certainty—a limitation. Nevertheless, owing precisely to the fact that these words are binding and, in a sense, permanent, possibilities are created. That is, human beings are spontaneous; we respond to stimuli, both physically and mentally, almost instantly. Therefore, we lack the benefit of permanence—the advantage of responses that can be withheld, delayed, or reconsidered even. Words in literature may be revisited, edited, or quoted with accuracy at almost any time; this is why we can take literature as life lessons and ponder upon many other possible responses to various stimuli—a privilege that does not exist in our life.

Almost similarly, "We Real Cool" is bound by words. "Left school. We," reads one of the poem's rather scarce lines. With words come the denotation, i.e. dictionary definition, and the connotation, i.e. particular feelings assigned to each word according to each culture and society. Upon first glance, readers instantly pick up the fact that these youths "Left school," which most likely implies that they must be up to no good. However, for more careful and imaginative readers, given how incredibly short the poem is, these words lead to endless possibilities of assumption. That is, one may wonder why these youths left school. Where do they live? In what type of environment does this take place and so on and so forth. Indeed, literature opens up imagination.

In conclusion, despite being confined in the restricted realm of words with limited meanings, literature is able to lead us to astounding possibilities through its quality of being permanent and, ironically, limited. Perhaps this is possible thanks to the boundless vastness of human minds, too.

- Logic: rewrite lead-in; the opening word "Undoubtedly" is a turn-off for discussion. If there is no doubt, argument is out of the question. How can "it can be argued" if the point is clearly undoubted?

- MLA check: titles of books and plays are italicized or underlined.

- Elaborate: Ruth as a limitation

- Good irony: words are limited yet enable unlimited replay and processing is a good point but needs to be illustrated and supported with textual evidence

- Needs substantiation: instead of speaking generally about human behavior with no support, use specific examples in the play of characters reacting to stimuli to illustrate and support your point, and instead of making sweeping statements about literature in general, give instances of specific words or phrases used in the play that illustrate your point about literary advantage

- Almost speculation: dwelling on possible reasons for the pool players' leaving school becomes dangerously close to talking about what the work does not do rather than what the work does do; fix: focus discussion on what's there in the text: the agency of the players conveyed by the phrase "We / Left school" and its implications that apply to the rest of the series of verb phrases in the poem as well

     


Very Little or No Analysis



Incomplete, Ran out of Time

Student K:

 

(25 points)  Discuss presentation of worth in two works we have read this semester. In responding, you might consider questions like: How is worthiness introduced or depicted? How does this shape the work? (What role does it play in the movement of the plot? How does it influence characterization? How does it affect imagery, dialogue, word choice and order, or sentence structure?) What can change perceptions of importance, merit, monetary value, and wealth? How is worth related to other features in the text such as food, movement, naming or labeling, silence or talk? 
 

Poetry is often regarded as a stricter art form than prose as it has regulations for the poets to use a certain patter, a certain rhyme scheme, a certain number of syllables. Yet, within these limitations, there is a possibility to play around and come up with very creative literary works.

The poems of Gwendolyn Brooks "We Real Cool" and Dylan Thomas "Do Not Go Gentle into That Good Night" illustrate the possibilities in limitations very well. Brooks uses only four stanzas with one subtitle to convey the idea of a group of young people out of school and enjoying their time. The limitations in this poem is, of course, how Brooks used no more than four words in a line and still painted a vivid picture in the readers' mind. However, the possibility of using the poem art form is that Brooks managed to use an enjambed "we" at the end of each line excerpt the last one. The enjambments give a sense of ambiguity, leading to various hypotheses regarding the function of "we." It is possible to interpret that "we" is an enclosement, to convey the sense that this group of young people will stay a gang whatever their actions are until they die from each other. Death is then the limit of the possibilities laid out.

Continuing with the theme of death, "Do Not Go Gentle into That Good Night" also discusses death and uses the strict rhyme scheme of a villanelle as its limitation. The villanelle here can be seen as a limitation so the poet cannot use words freely, but it can also be seen as a possibility to truly give meaning to death, as death is limiting.

As seen from the two works mentioned above, limitations is actually the source of possibility. Without limitations, there would be no possibilities.






- Too broad, general: introduction somewhat general; fix: combine with next paragraph.

- Proofread: mispelling of pattern.

- Use literary present tense: Brooks uses, manages to

- Good close reading: discussion of "we" enjambment is attentive to the details of Brooks' text

- Good argument: "we" as an enclosure is a good argument and succinctly illustrated and supported with textual evidence

- Needs improvement: budget your time well; speed up your writing

- Grammar: subject-verb agreement: limitations is
- Conclusion somewhat truistic

     

 

      

 


 


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